Not bad
I have to say, I've just recently started to get into producing hardstyle. And quite honestly it's been the hardest genre to get an understanding for yet! And well, your defiantly doing a pretty good job so far.
Keep it up, because the more you make the better you get. And i have to agree with the other reviews you kinda dragged the intro a bit too long. It's not bad, but you could easily cut it in half and still have a long flowing track. Also, the transition from the intro to the middle (Mid Intro) was a little sloppy.
The melody isn't too bad, but I feel like it's kinda repeating too much without any variation. It's still sounds pretty good. Now the kick, you've got a great Tok (punch) going and the sub hits pretty hard. The only thing i could complain about is that it needs more distortion on the tail. You can't hear the "Growl" per say of the tail.
Like i said in the beginning of this review, hardstyle is not an easy genre to get a feel for. Keep working on it, and you're gonna be making amazing songs in no time. All the ideas you've put into this song are very good. It's just a matter of practice from here!
Keep it up! And, stick with it! Because hardstyle is the best genre of music on this planet!
Tehehe
-DJ T3chnic
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